Вот попробовала написать стихотворение на английском, если какие-то слова непонятны ..вы можете спросить ....
Это мой не первый стих на иностр. языке, но первый по TMNT, так что не судите строго .. а хотя судите .... пожизненное всё равно не грозит ...

If you decide to leave your family,
Please don’t forget the way you feel,
It’s not the real, right emotions,
It’s only road yourself to kill.

Keep your heart under thirty locks,
Don’t show the weakness and depression,
You should be strong and bring the love
To memorize sweat, short expression.

You know, they tell, that you are wrong,
As it’s enough to train,
But all of them will carry on
With something to explain.

And all your troubles go away,
You are the one for them,
And all your missions of the day
Will seem to be okay.

You are the eldest, yes, you know,
But must you always be?
Please try to think – you should hold on
And find the better key.

And all the thirty locks will fall,
Your heart is now revealed,
And you will make important call –
That makes doubts disappear.

You are at home,
You are so happy,
You smile and bring so lovely light.
You are the one,
You are so thoughtful,
You are so kind each day and night.

WOW!!!

  Сообщение от Hagane 

WOW!!!

=)))

It's wonderful!

Блин я незнаю английский я ели ели немецкий то учю((((( а можно перевод?

Талантливо =)
Для незнаек английского, правда через онлайн переводчик, читать ориг. версию для тех кто знает английский будет гораздо приянтей:

It is MEGO!

Fantastic!!!!)))

It`s fantastic! ))) I see an English poem about turtles for the first time! It`s so beautiful and amazing!
I like it! =)))

Oh, thank you))) I also write a poem about Raph)))

Superb! *____*

Thank you)

That's wonderful, I can't wait for a new one

Thank you) you can read two more poems ... about Raphael and Donatello=)

Verse 5 +. So many emotions, passions. I even cry, but I get tears is not so easy. In General, an excellent verse

It is an exellent poem