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Самая ржачная серия! Старейший ржач!

Серия, конечно, смешная. Но здесь глупый пук. Что в этом такого самого ржачного?

Да, тут конечно сценаристы много чего понаплагиатили. Догадлись откуда? STAR WARS: episode V. Empire Strike back.
В ролях:
1)Леонардо-Люк Скайвокер
2)Старейший-Йода
Схожести в сюжете: Леонардо, как и Люк, призжает в Японию(на Дагобу)
в поисках учителя. Здесь он встречает забавного карлика(Старейший, Йода). Он отводит Лео(Люка) в свой дом. Потом молодой воин(джедай)
должен пройти испытание-победить противника. В ходе боя Лео, как и Люк, рассекают противнику маску, под которой каждый увидел свое лицо.
Неплохо, да?

Мне серия не очень понравилась .

Да там правда перебор

А мне нравится) Хотя я и не люблю "туалетный" юмор.

Очень смешная серия!

Subj: comments on Ep. 92 premise
Date: Tuesday, August 3, 2004 7:10:21 PM
From: Peter Laird
To: Lloyd Goldfine

Lloyd,

Here are my comments on Ep. 92 premise.

1.) Re: the following:

"But Splinter will hear none of it. He tells Leo that there is but one other master in all the world that Leo can turn to. He is an ancient, wise, skilled, learned master who rarely takes on new pupils. He is the sensei who taught Splinter’s own sensei, Hamato Yoshi, the ways of Ninjutsu. "

I think we need to do something here to explain -- at least a little bit -- how Hamato Yoshi's master can still be alive, as I'm sure Leo himself would wonder about that. Also, is this "Ancient One" a Guardian? Is he human?

2.) Re: the following:

"At any rate, Leo will eventually come to the realization that his rude, stinky, sloppy traveling companion is in fact the Ancient One that he has been seeking all along. And he will realize that what he has come here for he has already learned on the journey!"

Cool! I seriously hope this marks the end of the "morose Leo" period. One thing that might be kind of fun is to do a bit where Leo has just about fully concluded that, indeed, his weird companion is the "Ancient One", but he wants to force the Ancient One's hand and reveal himself in a test of some kind. What I'm thinking is that Leo will do something like spill a cup of tea over an artifact of some kind that his companion clearly values highly (maybe a scroll), and -- to save the artifact from being doused with tea, the Ancient One has to perform some incredible, nigh-on impossible acrobatic ninja move where he does a triple flip and sticks a landing on some highly improbable surface (upright bamboo sticks or something) while simultaneously whisking the scroll out of harms way AND catching the falling tea cup AND doing that in a way so as to actually CATCH the tea as it's spilling out. It's a breathtaking display of the soul of ninjutsu, and Leo bows to the master... who is a little disgruntled that Leo has tricked him into revealing himself in this manner, but he realizes that Leo has learned what he needs to learn and has earned the right to know who he is. (Should we think up a different name than "Ancient One"? After all, that's what Doctor Strange's teacher was called in the Marvel comics. Here are a couple of possibilities:

-- The Venerable
-- The Master Sage)



-- Pete


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Subj: Ep. 92 outline
Date: Friday, August 13, 2004 12:25:50 PM
From: Peter Laird
To: Lloyd Goldfine

Lloyd,

Here are my comments on the Ep. 92 outline.

1.) Re: the following:

"Leo (V.O. Narration): “I’ve traveled hundreds of miles… thousands of miles, looking for an answer….”"

I feel that the "hundreds of miles" part is superfluous here. I would take it out.

2.) Re: the following:

"Leo (V.O. Cont’d): “…leaving me to fight for both our lives … and doesn’t look good!” "

The last part of this line sounds a little off -- was there supposed to be an "it" between "and" and "doesn't"? In any event, I would probably prefer to end the line with an exclamation point after "lives".

3.) Re: the following:

"He tells Leo that there is but one master in the entire world with whom Leo can train."

A small point, but -- given that Splinter, while wise and knowledgeable, is not omniscient -- perhaps Splinter should tell Leo that as far as HE knows, "... there is but one master in the entire world with whom Leo can train."

4.) Re: the following:

"And we see a montage of images (in this order): of Leo stowing away on a freight steamer (he wears a full backpack) berthed at a Manhattan pier, of Leo looking out across the passing moonlit ocean surface, sneaking through the shadows of an Asian port city, hiking along jungle trails, past remote mountaintop lakes and ancient Japanese temples, ever closer towards the distant snowcapped peaks of a mountain range, and all the while we hear Splinter’s voice, telling Leo how to travel, where to go, and how to find the mystical door that will lead to the land wherein the Master Sage’s mountaintop retreat can finally be found."

I like this, and it will be a cool little sequence if (when) animated properly. Couple of things: "Ancient Japanese temples" are mentioned. Now, those kinds of structures look cool, but are we saying that this adventure takes place in Japan? I kind of thought we were implying it was in Tibet or Mongolia of something. The reason I bring this up is that I believe at the end of this fourth season we have Splinter telling the boys that they are heading for Japan, which is cool and exciting, and I wonder if having Leo go there in this episode might make that trip less unique.
Which actually raises another question in my mind -- while the "world travel" scenario sketched out in the above paragraph is cool, I wonder if it is really necessary for Leo to leave the continent? In other words, couldn't this sensei be anywhere (especially if at some point you have to pass through a "mystical door" to get to him)? Like on the opposite coast, perhaps somewhere in Alaska? It might be a little bit more believable that Leo could make his way in ninja stealth across the US and Canada than across the world. Also, his journey wouldn't take as long. Just a thought. (The "Yetis" could be Bigfeet!)
Also, might it not be fun to take a few seconds to have the other Turtles -- who would be concerned for Leo -- giving him a little send-off? They could each offer words of encouragement in their own inimitable fashions, Mikey could give him some special trail mix (Oreos, Doritos, and M&M's), etc.

5.) Re: the following:

"He passes cairn after cairn, the cairns and day blurring together and then the day rapidly fading when he suddenly walks past what looks like just another rock cairn… but after passing it he hears what sounds like a loud slow fart coming from behind him. "

Hey, I think it's funny -- but can we really get away with farting on Saturday morning?

-- Pete

Subj: comments on Ep. 92 first draft
Date: Wednesday, September 8, 2004 12:54:29 PM
From: Peter Laird
To: Lloyd Goldfine


Lloyd,

Here are my comments on Ep. 92 first draft.

1.) Re: the following:

"INT. TURTLE’S LAIR – DEEP UNDERGROUND – CONT’D
ON - MICHELANGELO. Mikey is on a couch reading a comic book. The title of the comic book is: Toxic Zombie Monkey. In the background we hear the sounds of blade striking blade and then hear Splinter sounding concerned. Upon hearing this statement of Leo’s Mikey looks up from his reading and cocks an arched eyebrow and points his eyes in the direction of the O.C. statement (but without turning his head).

SPLINTER (O.C.)
Even the unopened bottle will burst when its internal pressure becomes too much to bear."

Two things here. FIrst, what "statement of Leo's" is Mikey hearing? His voiceover from the preview? That would be very weird. I don't see any other statement from Leo. Maybe something is missing.
Second, Splinter's line doesn't need the "even", because as far as I know, it's ONLY unopened bottles that burst under too much internal pressure. So I would take out "even".

2.) Re: the following:

"SPLINTER (O.C.)
That is especially true for we five. We are family. Family, my son… family. We must be open with one another…."

Repeating the word family three times in two lines is a bit much. I would just take out that "Family, my son... family" line.

3.) Re: the following:

"SPLINTER
He is an ancient, wise, skilled and learned master who rarely takes on new pupils. He is the sensei to my sensei, Hamato Yoshi. "

Would it make more sense/read better if "is" was changed to "was" in this line as follows:

"He was the sensei to my sensei, Hamato Yoshi."

4.) This is not absolutely necessary, but I thought it might be cool if, when Leo is getting ready to leave on his journey, he is also given an old trench coat and hat (much like Raph had in the first TMNT movie and how we have sometimes disguised the Turtles in the comics) -- and maybe this gift should come from April and/or Casey (I was thinking that is would be nice to have them in this scene).
Another idea -- which might be handy to cut down on the amount of time we need to show Leo sneaking his way halfway across the planet, along with all the niggling and problematic issues of HOW he is able to do this without being caught -- would be as follows: Instead of Mikey giving Leo a graphic novel (not that that's a bad idea), he waits until everybody else has given their gifts and then he reveals his -- he asks Leo to follow him up to roof level, and suddenly SIlver Sentry arrives! Mike's gift to Leo is to have Silver Sentry fly him to Asia (not all the way to the land of the Ancient One, but at least to that continent).

5.) Re: the following:

"SPLINTER (V.O. – FADING OUT)
... where you must pass through “the snowmen’s notch.” "

Because of the way the Yeti "snowmen" guards are written (which I like), I wonder if it might be fun -- and at this point kind of weird and mysterious -- to add one word to Splinter's line as follows:

"SPLINTER (V.O. – FADING OUT)
... where you must pass through “the laughing snowmen’s notch.” "

6.) Given that "the Stinky One" farts a lot, I wonder if we could work one of our favorite phrases for farts -- "The Evil Wind" -- into some of his lines. (Reading further, I see that is IS mentioned at least once.)

7.) Re: the following:

"LEONARDO
I have some dried fruit, some peanut butter, chocolate—
THE STINKY ONE
Chocolate?! Gimme chocolate! Gimme now!"

When I read these lines, I immediately thought of the classic ad campaign for Reese's peanut butter candies -- remember the "You got your chocolate in my peanut butter!" "You got your peanut butter in my chocolate!"? -- and thought it might be fun for Stinky to demand both Leo's peanut butter and chocolate, mash them together into a disgusting mess, gobble it down, then sigh contentedly and say something like "Ahh... peanut butter AND chocolate...!"

8.) Re: the following:

"LEONARDO (O.C.)
Jeez! You’re unbelievable!
CUT to show Leonardo and the Stinky One seated on the ground around a small campfire. The campfire is the only source of light, giving us stark moody flickering lighting. The area around them, here at the base of the rock formation, is sandy.
THE STINKY ONE
You a talking green monkey frog and you call me unbelievable. You stupid.
LEONARDO
Turtle. I’m a turtle, not a frog."

Two things. First, would Leo say "Jeez!"? (A corruption of "Jesus" as we all know.) I think it would work fine without it.
Second, when Leo says that he's a turtle, not a frog, maybe he should also say "And I'm not a monkey, either."

-- Pete


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Subj: Re: Ep 92 ("The Ancient One")
Date: Thursday, September 16, 2004 1:08:59 PM
From: Peter Laird
To: Lloyd Goldfine

Lloyd,

Although I still think my idea of Silver Sentry giving Leo a lift over to Asia would save us (and Leo) a lot of time and headaches, I don't have a big problem with him finding his own way. However... if he is going to Asia, would he really hop a ride on a ship leaving New York? Wouldn't it make more sense if he made his way to the WEST coast and left from a Pacific port city? (Maybe a compromise here would be that Silver Sentry gives him a lift to California. OR maybe Casey could drive him there in his car -- ROAD TRIP!!! That could actually be the source for an "untold tale of Leo and Casey" next season.)
Also, assuming Leo makes it all the way on his own, this trip of his -- taking boats, walking, etc. -- will take months, probably. Does having Leo gone for months cause any problems with story continuity?

-- Pete

Очень весёлая и смешная серия.Кроме того момента где Лео нанёс рану Сплинтеру.Я бы в жизни не поверил что тот маленький,толстенький и вечно пукающий старичок-и есть Старейший.Да Лео в этой серии был такой горячий.Но мне понравилось когда приехал в Японию эти картинки Лео в шляпе мои самые любимые.Нравилось когда Лео дрался с Демонами.И он впервые здался.Вы слышали как сказал Раф
-Ненавижу когда Леонардо такой же как я.
Моя самая любимая серия из четвёртого сезона.Интересно что Старейший рассказал Лео про Мастера Йоши.И интересно что за чай они пили.Битва с каменным гигантом -ответы на все его вопросы..Спасибо за серию.

  Сообщение от Don2105 

.Интересно что Старейший рассказал Лео про Мастера Йоши..

Ответ сюда http://www.turtlepower.ru/showthread.php?t=680
Смотри очень печальная серия .

  

Ответ сюда http://www.turtlepower.ru/showthread.php?t=680
Смотри очень печальная серия .

Ты, видимо, не часто читаешь комменты Don2105'а - он часто задаёт риторические вопросы.

это хорошо или плохо

  

это хорошо или плохо

Это своеобразно))

  Сообщение от Don2105 

.Я бы в жизни не поверил что тот маленький,толстенький и вечно пукающий старичок-и есть Старейший.

Странно, но до меня сразу дошло ))
Просто я так и подумал, что он там не случайно и наверное и есть Старейший, что так и оказалось )

На правах оффтопа:

  

он часто задаёт риторические вопросы

Я кстати тоже, это помогает больше развить свою фантазию, эти вопросы как-бы подталкивают на другие ну и легче выражаться )

Ахахахаха , самая ржачная серия

Мне очень понравилась

Очень архетипичный эпизод. ) На вариации такого рода историй могу втыкать бесконечно - кинки наглаживаются, а тут еще леоцентричность...
Если опустить трэшовый юмор, то в целом серия прекрасна. Примерно со второго сезона предположила, что рано или поздно кому-нибудь из братьев панцирь разворотят в соответствии с реалистичностью подхода и периодическим попадаловом не в свою весовую категорию. То, что Лео проделал это сам с собой подчеркивает насколько все было запущено. Только вопрос как они... чем они трещины в панцире заделывают? Шпатлевкой? А про отлетевшие куски панциря чуть ли не до середины спины... сложно представить. И вообще это же капец больно, наверно, если с кожей вместе. О_о