02.12.2011, 19:50
palblog :: Blast from the Past #338: October 4, 2004: designs for Ep. 91, October 5, 2004: comment on Ep. 95 second draft, and October 8, 2004: comments on second draft of Ep. 96 and comments on Ep. 9
Subj: comments on Ep. 99 (nee 100)
Date: Friday, October 8, 2004 10:39:58 PM
From: Peter Laird
To: Lloyd Goldfine
Lloyd,
Here are my two comments on the Ep. 99 (nee 100) outline.
"Return of Savanti Romero Part 2"
1.) Re: the following:
"
A COMET streaks into frame from space, heading right for Earth!"
Should that be an asteroid instead of a comet?
2.) Re: the following:
"
Smiling, Savanti climbs on board the back of the quetzalcoatlus which quickly rises up, beating its 40 foot wingspan. It turns to Renet… Don is running to her side, but he’s too late.
Savanti aims the Time Scepter right at her, unleashing a blast of chronal energy. Renet glows, then DISAPPEARS."
I don't see why Savanti has to blast her with some kind of spell which makes her disappear (why didn't he do this to begin with?) instead of having the quetzalcoatlus grab her in its talons.
-- Pete
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